MORTEVIELLE: Update English translation

I checked some of the dialogs for which we were not sure, fixed them
when needed and removed the debug number. There are two lines
however that causes an issue as they are used for both men and
women, and in English we would need a different translation. The two
texts are:
It is his/her business…
Oh I don't have anything against him/her
The first one seems to be used more often for men than women (so
far I have seen it used for 3 men and 1 woman).
For the second one I changed it to plural in English as it also works
with the context and while it changes the meaning this is not
important.

1 files changed, 24 insertions, 24 deletions

diff --git a/devtools/create_mortdat/gametext.h b/devtools/create_mortdat/gametext.h
index 9a4f0f7fc5..e4a54cb92a 100644
--- a/devtools/create_mortdat/gametext.h
+++ b/devtools/create_mortdat/gametext.h
@@ -165,17 +165,17 @@ const char *gameDataEn[] =  {
 	"? ?$",
 	"Your move$",
 	"OK !$",
-	"Suddenly  Max  arrives with your suitcase:  \"Thank  you  for your @visit!\".Mister discreet \"private eye\" (in need of a private optici@an!). Thoroughly demoralised, you@leave the manor. You are useless!$",
-	"Leo interrupts:  \"The storm has  died down,I am going into town in@1 hour. Get ready\". You have lost@time...but not your life$",
-	"Congestion, the deadly flu... You@are stuck here! Your  whole  case@sinks slowly beneath the water$",
-	"The water is rising fast, freezing your last illusions. Before you@have time to react...you are dead$",
-	"As soon as you reach the bottom  of the well, a hand cuts the rope@Farewell sweet life!$",
-	"The storm covers your footprints.A wall of  silence falls heavily@on your shoulders. Slowly you  succumb to frosbite...$",
-	"You're not completely alone!  A  cold blade plunges into your back@In future, be more careful!$",
-	"You don't know what implication Leo may have had in Murielle's@death. Was she dead outright? In@any case, the family problems that you have uncovered in the course@of your enquiries would explain Leo's behaviour. You're not sure@that's the reason Julia had asked@for your help, but that's reason enough for you!Out of respect for@her, after taking certain precau-@tions you have a revealing talk with Leo.$",
+	"Suddenly  Max  arrives with your suitcase:  \"Thank  you  for your visit!\".@Mister discreet \"private eye\" (in need of a private optician!). Thoroughly demoralised, you leave the manor. You are useless!$",
+	"Leo interrupts:  \"The storm has  died down,I am going into town in 1 hour. Get ready\".@You have lost time...but not your life$",
+	"Congestion, the deadly flu... You are stuck here! Your  whole  case sinks slowly beneath the water$",
+	"The water is rising fast, freezing your last illusions. Before you have time to react... you are dead$",
+	"As soon as you reach the bottom  of the well, a hand cuts the rope Farewell sweet life!$",
+	"The storm covers your footprints.A wall of  silence falls heavily on your shoulders. Slowly you  succumb to frosbite...$",
+	"You're not completely alone!  A  cold blade plunges into your back. In future, be more careful!$",
+	"You don't know what implication Leo may have had in Murielle's death. Was she dead outright? In any case, the family problems that you have uncovered in the course of your enquiries would explain Leo's behaviour. You're not sure that's the reason Julia had asked for your help, but that's reason enough for you! Out of respect for her, after taking certain precautions you have a revealing talk with Leo.$",
 	"$",
-	"You don't have the keys to  the  manor. Your  cries  rest  unheard@You're   going   to   catch...             your death!$",
-	"With  a  circular  movement, the sword slices across you. Guts and@intestines spill out all over. A sorry state of affairs!$",
+	"You don't have the keys to  the  manor. Your  cries  rest  unheard You're   going   to   catch...             your death!$",
+	"With  a  circular  movement, the sword slices across you. Guts and intestines spill out all over. A sorry state of affairs!$",
 	"Home, Sweet home !$",
 	"The mystery behind a closed door$",
 	"Bewitching charm of these old rooms$",
@@ -338,14 +338,14 @@ const char *gameDataEn[] =  {
 	"Him! He is an upstart rogue! Perfumes must have killed his common sense. Moreover, when he's here he spends his evenings in his room$",
 	"I was very concerned about my mother's health, and now I don't feel like doing anything at all$",
 	"He would have done better to look after me a bit more and a bit less after his mother$",
-	"(313) It is his business...$",
+	"It is his business...$",
 	"He does not have much luck at the moment although his business is satisfactory$",
 	"I work with Pat but it's not going too well at the moment$",
-	"Oh really?! He has activities? He better take care of them seriously then$",
+	"Oh really?! He has occupations? He should take them seriously then$",
 	"Him and Pat are patners. I think it's going pretty well$",
 	"I take care of myself and that's already lots. How about you?$",
-	"(319) Oh that! I trust her. She knows how to keep herself busy$",
-	"(320) What! You have not yet discovered her main occupation..?$",
+	"Oh for that I trust her! She knows how to keep herself busy$",
+	"What! You have not yet discovered her main occupation..?$",
 	"She is working in the decoration business, and tastefully with that. She is always very well dressed$",
 	"If you like jewels, I have some good deals to propose for a short while$",
 	"The jewels...$",
@@ -363,19 +363,19 @@ const char *gameDataEn[] =  {
 	"He has a temper. You have to learn how to deal with him...$",
 	"Business is business. As for the family, I leave it as it is...$",
 	"Relations? Friendly relations? Financial relations, without a doubt$",
-	"Oh I don't have anything against him$",
+	"Oh I don't have anything against them$",
 	"He is a resourceful businessman. He sometimes tries to swim upstream but... he will always find a way to make it work$",
-	"(340) They all bore me... No! Not even that... Even if... some people...$",
+	"They are all boring .. No! Not even that .. Even if .. some of them ..$",
 	"Contrary to his mother, he is a very shy person ! So when you say relations...$",
 	"He must be trying very hard to remain nice despite all his troubles$",
-	"(343) His romantic relationship: it's over. His relationship with me: hasn't really started. As for the other ones: I don't follow the \"other ones\"$",
+	"His romantic relationship: it's over. His relationship with me: hasn't really started. As for the other ones: I don't follow the \"other ones\"$",
 	"I like everyone, as long as they are not trying to screw me over$",
 	"It is not enough to have a bit of money and to know how to talk for everyone to like you$",
 	"Not much to say about him... He is a nice and generous man. And what's more, he can be quite funny$",
 	"Nowadays I get along rather well with everyone. But, here, I am not going to say more about this$",
-	"(348) Nice feathers, but a bird's brain... Ask her husband$",
+	"Nice feathers, but a bird's brain... Ask her husband$",
 	"Is it for an appointment?$",
-	"(350) She is very lively! She does not burden herself with stupids prejudices$",
+	"She is very lively! She does not burden herself with stupids prejudices$",
 	"In my line of work, one mostly encounters beautiful women and gangsters$",
 	"The only sure thing he has going for him, it's his jewelery... And his wife, but he doesn't realize that$",
 	"It's an interesting character. Who is not always very easy to follow, but worth knowing$",
@@ -402,7 +402,7 @@ const char *gameDataEn[] =  {
 	"I met Julia when buying the manor. It was the only thing she owned. But all my wealth was hers...$",
 	"Apart from a few personal belongings, I think she didn't own anything anymore$",
 	"I think all her fortune came from Leo. So, pfft!$",
-	"(377) Apart from the letter for you I posted, nothing very important!$",
+	"Apart from the letter for you I posted, nothing very important!$",
 	"I was very happy she gave me her bound bible as a present$",
 	"It happened fast and she didn't have time to make any particular will$",
 	"Her last gift suprised me$",
@@ -412,15 +412,15 @@ const char *gameDataEn[] =  {
 	"Well yes! Like everyone, I believe$",
 	"A dagger$",
 	"I have never been looking around in the attic!$",
-	"(387) You either can read the past or pick a door$",
+	"You can either see through walls or pick a door$",
 	"The portrait of a young girl: it's Murielle...$",
 	"You know, I didn't know her that well$",
 	"She was very charming, but above all she was Julia's lady-in-waiting$",
 	"She was the only truly interesting woman I've met$",
 	"She had a great knowledge in history, and you learned a great deal when you asked her about it$",
-	"(393) I've always wondered why some people fancied her!$",
+	"I've always wondered why some people fancied her!$",
 	"If the room is closed, ask Leo$",
-	"(395) I closed her door after her death and I'd like it to remain this way for a while$",
+	"I closed her door after her death and I'd like it to remain this way for a while$",
 	"You know how it is: family relations$",
 	"All those years, I've never regretted serving her$",
 	"I loved her as much as she loved me, I think$",
@@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ const char *gameDataEn[] =  {
 	"I don't remember$",
 	"This is Murielle. I took that picture, and actually they developed it backwards$",
 	"You sure are curious!... It's not worth anything$",
-	"(404) Grimoires, parchment and manuscripts: it is Leo's realm$",
+	"Grimoires, parchment and manuscripts: it is Leo's realm$",
 	"Too bad the motto doesn't appear here...$",
 	"This is beautiful... And very old...$",
 	"Hey! That's a place I've never visited$",